~Aimless~

Everything was so clear,
Yet so hard to distinguish when its near.
The path to reach it was ever full of thorns,
Success prevails after perseverance is born.

Life,is of tears,of pain,and to some,not more than a game.
Taking things for granted is what makes us lame.
Materialistic being one of the main characteristics of this modern day,
True feelings are not easily gained.

Why want to be outstanding?
As if being the norm is a sin.
Why not give your best?
At least you won't regret.
The contradiction of life..

And the questioning mind of ours,
Leads us to where we want to go,
And also mold our respective lives.
But don't forget it also brings trouble,
If we poke our nose at people's woes.

Words used as a tool,
Communication could be formed.
Lies could be made.
Love could be spread,
Hurt could be inflicted.
Misunderstandings could be solved.

Comes what may,
Proper thinking is the way.
For by the end of all the thorns,
A rainbow awaits you when else is gone..

8 comments:

mayc 9/08/2007 9:25 AM  

a beautiful rainbow indeed!
nice poem.. =)

Anonymous 9/08/2007 1:27 PM  

did i tell u b4 that u write nice poems? =)

Kelly 9/08/2007 1:28 PM  

Thanks for the compliments girls,but I dunno why,only when I'm feeling rather negative I could write poems...

YY 9/09/2007 10:49 AM  

Hey, you should send your poem to here --> http://www.poetry.com/contest/contest.asp?suite=A70401-11474
good luck!

Kelly 9/09/2007 12:11 PM  

Har?I dun think this is a good poem lo,just very shallow and random thoughts only..dun embarrass myself..hehe

YY 9/09/2007 7:57 PM  

You never knw if you never try, isn't it?! Why not...

Phooi Fun 9/09/2007 8:07 PM  

walaueh... how did u wirte such thg...amazing ler....

Kelly 9/09/2007 10:39 PM  

......I just write very randomly only lo.....you can also what phooi fun...

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